Students will write a memo to an appropriate audience of the City College of New York, addressing a problem of your choosing on campus. This problem can be related to renovating or improving areas of the campus (cafeterias, dorms, classrooms, parking etc.)

After looking at your comments i fully agree with what you said as proofreading and spell check is important to any document before final submissions because i do tend to forget to do spell checks if I’m being honest because I’m always rushing to get things in on time.I’ve proceeded by revising for spelling errors and fixing my sentence construction.

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